Overcoming Challenges
In this Essay, I continue to work on many of my weaknesses that I have in writing. I hope to include more sources while working with synthesis. In my rough draft, I did not include enough cited source work, but will have to be included. I also want to continue working on Meta d, by wrapping my paragraphs all together in the conclusion sentences. Essay 2 can be improved in many ways from Essay 1. First is with MLA format, and eliminating those stupid mistakes. Second is including more support in the essay and backing my points up with examples and cited information. Essay 2 can be built upon Essay 1 in many ways. Everything that we have learned and went over up to this point, including Meta D and MLA citing information on Essay 1 can be in turn used on Essay 2. Essay 2 brought synthesis work along with it, and those three items can all be taken on to Essay 3 and beyond in writing in the future. All this information can used just not in English, but in other courses as well to help improve my writing skills. Overall, by taking the positives out of Essay 1, eliminating the negatives and working on my rough draft of Essay 2 hard, I can improve on my overall writing in English 112. I look Essay 2 to be a positive experience, and hope to reach my goal.