http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com Just another Mybgsuonline.com weblog Fri, 11 Apr 2008 17:44:05 +0000 http://backend.userland.com/rss092 en In coming to a conclusion of English for this year and the research paper, I can look back and realize the changes and how I write now, compared to just four months ago through the readings of both the textbook and research conducted by myself. The textbook outlined and structured ... http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com/2008/04/11/writing-process-2/ Having someone else writing a paragraph I had already wrote was a different experience. I don't think it helped nor harmed my thinking, it just was an interesting way of reading my thoughts. I feel that what I want to get across in my writing is tough to be done ... http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com/2008/03/26/march-26/  In the State of Ohio, as many of us know a growing epidemic is growing, job loss. Each day a hard-working, blue collar employee is turned away at the doors from his or hers job, where that particular person may have built their careers. Unfortunately, a slow down has not ... http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com/2008/03/23/job-loss-in-state-of-ohio/ I learned in a source analysis that a lot could accomplished, more than I originally thought. Through a source analysis, I realized how someones primary cause can differ and through several sources arguments can be compared, creating a thought provoking exercise. Also, a source analysis is an opportunity to break down ... http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com/2008/03/19/march-19th/ The proposal for essay three was much more useful than I thought it would be for such a short assignment. The proposal zeroed in on the focus of my essay and what I need to concentrate on. I now have a clear understanding, with my sources in mind what my ... http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com/2008/02/28/proposal/ 1. My issue of the loss of industry and jobs in the State of Ohio is current and reliable. Jobs are still being lost to this day and the phenomenon has been occuring for several years upon decades. To make the information relevant, I can connect with the people of ... http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com/2008/02/25/building-a-thesis/ I began this thought of what exactly I want to do my research paper on with a very broad, open minded focus. I am interested in many things, including sports and surprisingly politics, unlike many college kids. Many ideas are important to me, including family values and friends. That would ... http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com/2008/02/24/essay-3/ In this Essay, I continue to work on many of my weaknesses that I have in writing. I hope to include more sources while working with synthesis. In my rough draft, I did not include enough cited source work, but will have to be included. I also want to continue ... http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com/2008/02/17/overcoming-challenges/ The writing process discussed in From Inquiry to Academic Writing is a good way I believe to be a good writer. I have used the writing process described in From Inquiry to Academic Writing to an extent, but have not done it entirely in the process they suggest. When putting ... http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com/2008/02/11/writing-process/ A story of mine that involves synthesis, along with attempting to persuade someone, is a trip this summer to The Country Concert in Fort Laramie, Ohio. I went last year and had a great time with some friends, but this year I want a few closer friends to go, including ... http://mmontgo.mybgsuonline.com/2008/02/09/synthesis-country-concert-08/